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Fiolee: New Thoughts ch.1

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(ok the the set up here is that Fionna is now 17 and she had recently broken up with Fire prince, also with this as my first work my sister helped me out with the bit of the writing)  
Fionna p.o.v.:

   I woke up with tears in my eyes. I knew that it it had been a dream, but it was about my real break up with FP. I brought my knees up to my chest and pulled the sleeve of my sweater down over my arm. After a moment of staring at nothing, I slowly climbed out of bed and headed toward the ladder. As I climbed my foot suddenly slipped on a rung. I inhaled sharply and braced myself to hit the floor.

  1..2..3..4 seconds passed without the jolt of pain I was expecting. I opened my eyes and found my self looking up into Marshall lee's deep startling crimson eyes, slightly obscured behind his raven hair. I felt my face grow warm as I realized how close his face was to mine and pushed him away slightly.
   
   "H-hi Marshall, thanks for catching me, what are you doing here?".

   "Well I had heard from cake that you and FP had broken things off and i wanted to come over and see if you were ok" he turned his face away slightly, but I could still see his cheeks darken as he blushed. I started to smile at it but I stopped myself and tugged on his shirt

   "You can put me down now....softly" I soon regretted that last part as he dropped me on the couch. I stuck my tongue out at him and threw a pillow at his face.

 Marshall lee p.o.v.:

   I wanted to cheer Fionna up, so I made a cake and decided to bring it over. But as I came in I saw her coming down the ladder and slip. In an instant I flew over and caught her before she hit the ground. I held her for a moment to make sure that she was ok.
   
   She slowly opened her eyes and I found that I could not look away from her brilliantly sky blue eyes. She actually had to ask me to put her down and I hoped against hope that she she couldn't tell I was blushing.  
 
   I floated back to the box that held the cake which had partially fallen out of the box and smeared on the floor. I sighed as I picked up the box and set it on the kitchen counter. I grabbed mop and when I turned around I saw Fionna inspecting the destroyed cake. She picked up a piece and ate it. A smile immediately spread across her face and took another piece and stuffed it into her mouth.
   
   "Marshall this is so good! Did you make it?" she said with her mouth half full of cake. My brain raced for a second in surprise that she liked it.
   "Y-yeah, yes i did" i blurted out, my voice barley audible. After i put away the mop i looked over and saw that she was still just pulling the cake out of the box with her bare hand and i swiped the box away and floated up just out of her reach.

   "Hey i was eating that!" she yelled at me jumping up trying to hit me, i chuckle watching her get flustered and thought she looked adorable. For a second i had to remember that she knew how to use a sword.  

"Well get a plate" i say back to her, she responded with a complied grunt and went to the cupboard. She pulled out three plates and set them down. Two were glass and one was plastic, and before i could figure out why she brought out the plastic one , she threw it at me.

   "Jleabus what was that fo-" I ducked and looked where the plate had gone. Suddenly Fionna pounced on me, sending me crashing to the ground. She dug her knee into my back while holding me in a headlock.

"Drop...the...cake" she said tightening she squeeze around my neck. I complied and handed her the box and she got off of me."Thanks Marshall" she said giving  smile showing she enjoyed her victory. when she turned away i smiled too feeling happy that i was able to make her smile.

"Well then, lets eat that cake, or whats left of it" i walked over and grabbed a fork, stealing a bite from her plate.
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i like your story continue!